Independent writing TPO 25
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
That in the modern world, all the people take attention to their communities is an axiom. One of the most perceivable influences of this issue could be seen in all assets of society sections such as health, investment for society and so on. A question, which is a matter of debate, a controversial one, is whether young people have equal contribution in assisting their communities or not. I am to a great extent, on the belief that the young people have not sense of responsibility on their society as well as other elders.
To commence, one of the compelling reasons that justify the thesis is that, all people are engaged in their own private lives especially young people. Simply stated, the youth are more involved in education and occupation. Needless to say that, this period of age is significant time to dedicating catching knowledge and finding an appropriate career. To clarify, the majority of youth tolerate stresses of schooling and planning for the future job to some degrees, therefore, the expectations from them to have attention to their societies may be unfair. For instance, I experienced various hurdles during my best time of my life, the young age. This is undeniable that I could not help my society in my challenging period of age.
Alongside with the first reason elaborated above, the effects of the government to support the young generation are one another point which requires meticulous attention. Going to the depth, always every action brings a reaction with itself. To put it in general words, when government pay attention to the young people requirements and discern their dilemmas for educating, finding job and marriage, in turn; they have feedback to these functions and would try to change the society fate by performing better in the community. Informed of the fact that, in my country, young people are underestimated and we have a considerable number of brain drain in our society. Maybe it would be odd that we do not have suitable recreation time of place for pleasure, accordingly; all young people will be anxious people which afford to save themselves.
Finally, psychologically speaking, not only the youth but also, all the people would not have the inclination to assist their community unless the government has a determined program for people. Logically speaking, if the government has a keen eye on the society, it can see that this is the human sources which handle the country industry and should have a designed program to manage their contribution in every aspect of communication.
In conclusion, I do agree that the young people do not offer sufficient time to helping their communities due to some reasons like their engagement in their private life, the absence of government support and lacking determined program in the society to induce them for contribution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 460, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'sensed'.
Suggestion: sensed
...e belief that the young people have not sense of responsibility on their society as w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, finally, first, if, may, so, therefore, well, as for, for instance, in conclusion, in general, such as, as well as, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.0752688172 310% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2363.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 469.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03837953092 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65364457471 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89100639822 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505330490405 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 741.6 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.443390796 48.9658058833 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.277777778 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0555555556 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72222222222 5.45110844103 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180720883266 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612244366344 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525735035461 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118730284988 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06533486092 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 86.8835125448 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.