Writing Task 2 essay Academic ielts Some people say that relationships should be based on honesty and trust Others believe that it is sometimes necessary to be dishonest in order to maintain harmony Which approach do you consider to be better in relations

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Writing Task 2 essay Academic ielts Some people say that re...
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... culture or back ground of the community ,wherever the person lives.Honesty and tr...
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Suggestion: Honesty
...he community ,wherever the person lives.Honesty and trust are the backbones of the sinc...
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... backbones of the sincere relationships.Many favour the two mentioned factors to bui...
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... backbones of the sincere relationships.Many favour the two mentioned factors to built the ...
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...d factors to built the strong friendship .Others advice to adopt the nature of uns...
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...factors to built the strong friendship .Others advice to adopt the nature of unsinceri...
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...e occasions in order to have the balance .I agree with the view of honesty and fai...
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...occasions in order to have the balance .I agree with the view of honesty and fait...
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...ere are different kinds of relationships ,for example husband wife relationship,pa...
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...s ,for example husband wife relationship,parents children relationship,siblings ,friends...
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...lationship,parents children relationship,siblings ,friendship with colleagues and many ot...
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...,parents children relationship,siblings ,friendship with colleagues and many others.Every r...
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...endship with colleagues and many others.Every relation need one to be true to the oth...
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...e key component for healthy connections.It is obviously true that if one is not fa...
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...t if one is not fair with another person ,the distances start to develop .For inst...
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...r person ,the distances start to develop .For instance ,if one lies to another man...
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...person ,the distances start to develop .For instance ,if one lies to another man ,t...
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...distances start to develop .For instance ,if one lies to another man ,that relatio...
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...For instance ,if one lies to another man ,that relationship will never grow and wi...
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...ll have failures in healthy relationship .Furthermore that particular person can n...
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... have failures in healthy relationship .Furthermore that particular person can never be tru...
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... have failures in healthy relationship .Furthermore that particular person can never be tru...
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... particular person can never be trusted in future.To Prevent this breach in the relations...
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...r person can never be trusted in future.To Prevent this breach in the relationship...
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... Prevent this breach in the relationship ,one must be faithful and truthful to the...
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...uthful to the other person at all times.Likewise if we start to hurt the feelings of oth...
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...uthful to the other person at all times.Likewise if we start to hurt the feelings of oth...
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...by backbiting or neglecting or suspicion,it will affect the relationship definitely...
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...will affect the relationship definitely in a bad way in future. On the other hand, being ho...
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...he relationship definitely in a bad way in future. On the other hand, being honest does ...
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...ght hurt another person's feelings.On the basis of this some are having the o...
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...ng the opinion not to be always truthful ,but at occasions the person can lie ,but...
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...ful ,but at occasions the person can lie ,but adopting this way can endanger the r...
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... the relationships. Due to many factors ,i believe that strong relationship are m...
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...he relationships. Due to many factors ,i believe that strong relationship are ma...
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... each other and not by dishonesty which always will lead to many conflicts and cannot help to ma...
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...en the people who are having connections . To conclude ,I am in the favour of ado...
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...ho are having connections . To conclude ,I am in the favour of adopting the natur...
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...f sincerity and honesty at all the times,as trust takes many years to develop while...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, likewise, second, so, while, for example, for instance, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1986.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18537859008 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17480707392 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524804177546 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 613.8 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 230.346491557 49.4020404114 466% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 220.666666667 106.682146367 207% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.5555555556 20.7667163134 205% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.5555555556 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 40.0 5.01903807615 797% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409512513743 0.244688304435 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.235904277215 0.084324248473 280% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.170225358528 0.0667982634062 255% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236209698319 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.192510105671 0.056905535591 338% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.3 13.0946893788 186% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.85 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 11.3001002004 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.71 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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