the table below describes victims by age group and offence category in Venezuela,1999
The table illustrates the number of victims in separate five age group and offence type in Venezuela in 1999.
Overall, robbery was the most offence among five categories and 15-24 was also the highest group that being victim of criminals in 1999.
According to the table, Robbery was recorded the first ranking with 9680 case of the total victims. By contrast, the quantity of victim being negligence was the least figure with only 54 victims, which had a huge different from that of robbery. Additionally, following robbery, murder and blackmail saw a same pattern: the number of murder case increased from 0-14 years old and reach a peak at 72 and 89 respectively. Conversely, newborns and younger teenager was the main target of kidnapping of dangerous criminals with 110 cases.
It can be clearly to seen that, the children and working age force was easily vulnerable being the victims of gangs with higher recorded cases. Furthermore, the numbers of blackmail victims in both age group 15-24 and 45-64 years old almost doubled that of murder. 523 children from 0-14 was robbed compared to 4558 victims of 15-24 years old.
- The chart below shows the number of passengers arriving at a train station per hour across a day and also the average price in US Dollars of their tickets 72
- Some universities offer online courses as an alternative to classes delivered on campus. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? 89
- Some people think that government should give financial support to artists, musicians, poets. Others think it is a waste of money. Discuss both view and give your opinion 89
- The given graph shows the consumption of fast food in the UK (per week) from 1970 to 1990. 78
- People think that children nowadays have more freedom To what extent do you agree or disagree 74
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'group' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'groups'.
Suggestion: groups
... number of victims in separate five age group and offence type in Venezuela in 1999. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, first, furthermore, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 950.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02645502646 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53501555318 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57671957672 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.6416549369 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.555555556 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.13902439024 702% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23087015817 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110205761551 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14600841506 0.0843802449381 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21072636347 0.15604864568 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.16807886246 0.0819641961636 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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