Compare and contrast your way of life with that of your parents. Which way of life do you think would be more satisfying to future generations.
It is a well perceived thing that as time changes, the lifestyle changes. The way how our parents and forefathers used to live is different from how my generation live. With the development of technology, introduction of democracy and open culture the world is getting more and more advanced. In my opinion, my way of living will be more satisfying for the future generations for different reasons which I am explaining in following paragraphs.
First of all, my generation are tech savvy. Since the early childhood, my generation got familiar with use of technology and internet. My generation is more advanced and familiar with its use than my parents. As the use of technology is rapidly increasing, it has rapidly changed the way on how we think and behave. The advancement in communication like use of mobile phone, email has helped us to be more efficient. My parents surely didn't had chance to enjoy it. As it will be more advanced on the future, the following generation should obviously be equipped with its use in daily life.
Secondly, the society has changed and developed a lot as compared with my parents. The way how people used to perceive is different and my generation is enjoying the liberty of freedom and democracy. My parents had lots of restriction due to complicated social structure coupled with norms and tradition while my generation are more open for ideas and the world is uniting as a common culture. I prefer the future generation to live in democratic society with no bounds and restrictions on their thinking.
Lastly, the world is being more competitive with the advancement of science and technology. The way of teaching and learning has been dramatically changed than it was before. My parents only had school education but now only having school education is not enough. To have a good living, my generation need to had at least university degree. With no doubts, the education system will be more developed in the future. The future generation should really struggle hard from the early age to make their stand in the world of competition. If they live their life just as my parents did, they will certainly not have any decent job and they might need to struggle to make their living.
To conclude, as time changes the way of living changes. To live a satisfied life in future, the next generation should be more innovative, competitive, smart and intelligent than my generation. The life how my parents lived was simple with few opportunities. The future ahead is very competitive but equally has myriad of opportunities to succeed and live a satisfied life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, lastly, really, second, secondly, so, well, while, at least, no doubt, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.0752688172 297% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2170.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 441.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92063492063 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87024852986 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453514739229 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 705.6 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 13.0 3.08781362007 421% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8026162287 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4615384615 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9615384615 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21342331905 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709917736255 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505026796086 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145088135801 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390376759643 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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