Agree or disagree?
Nowadays it is not important for people to have regularly family meals together.
Although many believe in these days it is important for most people to have regularly family meals together, I, on the other hand, believe nowadays it is not important for people to have family meals together. I will address the most discernible reasons why I feel this way in the following.
To begin with, nowadays almost all family members have to work, because they want to provide their family good lifestyle. Thus, they are in different schedule, they could not have family meals together. My family experience is a good example of this. When I was a university student I always ate breakfast alone, because both of my parents had been working, and my brother university was totally different from me. Consequently, when I went back home from my university my brother was not at home. Not only that, but we did not have family dinner as well, because my brother did not ate dinner and my parents went to sleep very soon. In contrast, my grand parents told me they always had family meals, because my grand mother for instance did not work and she prepared breakfast or even lunch and my grand father came home from meals. This example illustrate that family members could not have dinner together, because they are often on totally different schedule, thanks to modern life style.
Moreover, in these days people accsess to innumerable type of food, hence they build different taste. Not only that but also, they can prepare their food very fast, ant eat that. For instance, I am vegetarian, and as I said in previous paragraph both of my parents had been working when I was a university student. However, in weekend we could eat meal together, but we did not do that. Because we used to ate breakfast fore example in different time, for instance I ate breakfast at 7 A.M but my parents ate that at 6 A.M. Not only that but also my brother always ordered Pizza, and my parents ate chicken and I ate salad for lunch. My grand parents again did not access to these kind of food, hence they ate whatever they had even if they did not like that.
Last but mot the least, today children do not care about traditional any more. For example, in the past parents forced their child to have meals with them but today parents leave their child alone and encourage them to have meals in their rooms.
In conclusion, it is for all the aforementioned reasons, I firmly believe today it is not important for individuals to have family meals together. This is because of modern life style they are on different life schedule, and because people access to different kind of food and have different taste, and because children do not care about traditional.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: eat
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Suggestion: illustrates
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: M
...me, for instance I ate breakfast at 7 A.M but my parents ate that at 6 A.M. Not o...
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, as to, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2191.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 468.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68162393162 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4270673288 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.412393162393 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 697.5 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7037009898 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.55 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1 5.45110844103 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274237005523 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102495551545 0.076458572812 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146462252609 0.0737576698707 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215414232959 0.150856017488 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.157757326236 0.0645574589148 244% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.63 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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