An increasing number of children are overweight which could result many problems when they grow older both in terms of their health and heath care costs. Why do you think so many children are overweight? What could be done to solve this problem?
These days, there is a controversy surrounding the issue of the obesity among children throughout the globe. Some assert that being overweight would have a detrimental effect on children’s health and also financial support of treatment will get them in the trouble in the future. I persistently support this idea, and in my personal view, children are involved in this issue in the view of the fact that now they are not only enough physically active, but also they choose to eat much more fast food rather than eating healthy.
There are a number of reasons for the proliferation of overweight children in the society. The first among such factors are eating a redundant amount of junk food. According to a thorough scrutiny, 17% of children aged from 2-19 are a prey of obesity. This is because there are some parents who choose not to cook at home because they are indolent and thereby prefer to eat non-healthy food at fast food places like McDonald's, which leads them as well as their kids to be fat. Yet another factor, in my opinion, is not introducing the kids to sports and exercises. In the modern day society, children are provided with their personal phones, laptops, and video game consoles. Furthermore, on an average, a child spends about 8 hours using technology per day. Therefore, sitting at home all day and not physically playing games can also accelerate fat as well as other harmful effects to other body parts like eyes, brain, and heart.
In addition, if the parents want their kids to stay fit, it is essential that they are being more careful of what their children eat as well as focusing on their daily activities. Parents should have a diet plan, in which their broods are allowed to eat a very little amount of junk food; also, mothers/fathers should try to prevent eating outside food as much as possible and cook healthy food at home instead. Moreover, keeping an eye on how much time a child spends in front of screens is significant. There should be a strict timetable, in which a child can only spend 1-hour playing video games and at least 2 hours playing sports and exercising.
In conclusion, if couples want their children to be fit and healthy, they have to spend a lot of time with their kids being staggering with their eating habits as well as the use of technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, at least, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 7.0 300% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 5.60731707317 482% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 33.7804878049 169% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1921.0 965.302439024 199% => OK
No of words: 405.0 196.424390244 206% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74320987654 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 3.73543355544 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60560637386 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 106.607317073 194% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511111111111 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.0 283.868780488 203% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8813441447 43.030603864 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0625 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3125 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0625 5.23603664747 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168397081532 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602638925969 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520854249742 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114723676684 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0119613738356 0.0819641961636 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 40.7170731707 192% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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