The tendency of human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashion clothes and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree?
It is true that most people show increasing tendency to follow the popular trend.There could be several reasons why this is the case, but I believe the main explanation could be peer pressure and media influence.
There are various reasons why many people have inclined to imitate each other. Human beings naturally enjoy the beauty, therefore they try to synchronize themselves with the latest vogues or products from clothes and mobile phone to cars and even houses. For example, new styles in clothes and fashion accessories are introduced every season.Surprisingly, the majority of people throw away what they were using, and embracing new styles. As a result, this attitude may create a demand circle. In the other word, one pay for attire and this approach will empower the fashion industry.
On the other hand, media has the substantial impact on people’s life. Write-up related to fashion or new technology and celebrity’s life regularly are covered by media consequently, individuals are encouraged to follow them and purchase their products. Similarly, the subtle influence of advertisement should not be underestimated. Film-maker, for example, gets paid to show a brand in their movies, in this way they try to convince the audience that if they want to be seen as beautiful and smart, they should use the certain product. In fact, it is not easy to decide not to surrender when you are continuously bombarded with such messages.
In conclusion, it seems to me that public tend to copy from whatever they adore, and fashion industry was created as a result of such behavior.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, may, similarly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15325670498 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9717676465 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63601532567 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2687876553 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.083333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0833333333 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149420656943 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453500263548 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344694947703 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840473548165 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262338994008 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.