If you want to study a particular area of climate change, which area/subject will you choose? .
Nowadays, contamination of the environment and global warming has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world, which leads to a moot question “whether climate change and the environment is a controversial subject for study or not?”. It is a widely held view that preserving natural ecosystem is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that one must weigh up carefully the pros and cons of this issue.
To begin with, it is a common belief that considering preventive approaches to protect the environment play a vital role in each society. To put into consideration, I express several reasons why I support this idea. First and foremost is that these days the toxic gases that emitted from the defective vehicle can be that most important contributor to polluting cities as well as an extensive range of incurable disease, including skin cancer, respiratory disorders, and heart attack. Secondly, it can be argued that the greenhouse gases that spread from the industrial factories help to global warming and destruction of the ozone layer. In addition to this information, it should be mentioned that the aquatic ecosystem will be endangered by a large amount of disposal that is thrown into the sea and rivers.
However, there is no doubt that some informed decision must be taken to address these challenges. One possible approach is that the government should offer loans to factories and encourage them to relocate to less beautiful areas. The other alternative solution is to raise citizen public awareness to leave their private cars and use the comprehensive public transport systems.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that rational decision must be taken into consideration to decrease the pollution. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and individuals are hoped heighten their intellect.
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- Mass media like TV, newspaper and radio influence people, particularly young generation. Do you think it works as a pivot to shape the society? What is your opinion? 80
- Many people think that regions affect the successful person. What is your opinion about the native region and accomplished person’s influence on the region he belongs to? 88
- If you want to study a particular area of climate change, which area/subject will you choose? . 78
- If you want to study a particular area of climate change, which area/subject will you choose? . 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...vironment and global warming has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, in addition, no doubt, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34210526316 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02258780681 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628289473684 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.6080030211 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.333333333 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0382395425768 0.244688304435 16% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0102960170136 0.084324248473 12% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0267915483796 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0214422798825 0.151304729494 14% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030652310404 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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