Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines.
Should parents be made by law to immunize their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not the immunize their children?
Nowadays, medicine technology has improved in past century, such as use of vaccines to prevent many childhood diseases and decrease the death of youth. Most people think that government had established a law to enforce children to get vaccine is a great advantage . Correspondingly, some people think they should have individuals right to choose immunuse thier children or not. In this essay, I am going to discuss about this argument.
First of all, undoubtedly, childhood diseases can be prevented through the use of vaccines that I'm fully agree. Especially, the number of to young death has been decreased by the advancing medicine technology which has became indispensable today.
On the other hand, by contrast, some people rejected to immunize their children to prevent disease. Perhaps, they could not afford the fee of vaccine, therefore they still stayed on the opposite.
The way of conclusion, children is the majority part of next generation, we should immunize the children from the threat of childhood diseases. Thus government has to fund to medicine experiment and the fee of vaccines.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, still, therefore, thus, as to, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 1207.87684729 77% => OK
No of words: 176.0 242.827586207 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30681818182 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.92707691288 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91621759583 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 139.433497537 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642045454545 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 379.143842365 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7937043231 50.4703680194 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.4 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.25397266985 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349081367911 0.242375264174 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109300049808 0.0925447433944 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942103674247 0.071462118173 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173533836784 0.151781067708 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321880659414 0.0609392437508 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 55.0591133005 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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