Many people think that international travel will decrease in the future. Do you think this will be a positive or a negative development?
Everyday a big number of people travel all over the world. Some of these travels are internal while the others are international. Each travel is formed base on an idea such as business, adventure, relaxation and many other ideas. Recently statistics show that the number of international travels are reduced. This reduction can cause both, positive and negative effects.
First discuss the positive effects of this development. First of all, the pace of life speeds up and as a result people are too busy and they prefer to do their business by using Internet instead of travelling overseas and consequently they can spend more time with their families. Moreover they cans save money and get result in a shorter time and the money can invest in their business or spend for other purposes.
One of the negative effects of this development is the economic problems. Imagine every month 1million people travel to US in order to do their business. This number of individuals spend a big amount of money in the destination company which is very good for the economy of the destination country. Moreover, through these international travels the culture of countries can spread and people from different places learn about these cultures. But unfortunately by reducing the number of these travels the former effects will disappear.
To conclude, It seems, by the fast progress in technology specially internet, in the future the number of international travels will reduce. Although it will have some good effects, the negative consequences are more outstanding. One way to prevent the bad effects is to focus on tourism and highlight the tourist attractions to improve or boost the economy of the country.
- Public places are noisy What are the causes of this and what do you think should be done about it 70
- Nowadays congestion and traffic jams are a common and major problem in most cities. Some people believe it is a good idea to construct wider roads to resolve this issue. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? What can be the solution, in your opini 73
- Some parents buy their children large number of toys to play with What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys 33
- Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishm 67
- Some people believe that technology caused some gap between the two generations. To what extend do you agree? 73
Sentence: One of the negative effects of this development is the economic problems.
Description: The fragment the economic problems is not usually preceded by is
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace is with are
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 279 350
No. of Characters: 1393 1500
No. of Different Words: 148 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.087 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.993 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.685 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 104 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 79 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 52 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 25 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.438 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.396 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.438 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.322 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.513 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.059 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5