It is said that for some developed countries, tourism may cause some disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?
In the era of globalisation, tourism attractions can be considered as a prominent aspect of nation's ornament. Some individuals opine that spending money on excursion can be beneficial, where others say these expenses are waste of money. This essay will evaluate how is it beneficial and detrimental, and lead to a logical conclusion.
On the one hand, tourism point holding plenty of advantages which can be useful to nations. Monumnent and historical places, can attract tourists, and play important role in country's income and define our culture. For Example, Taj Mahal, a wonder place on earth, has now become tourist attraction, which represents India's culture and helps to income of India. As a result, people get aware about nation's civilization and gain knowledge about particular site.
On the other hand, As a necessary needs of a under developed country, it should use its funds to provide and fulfill essential needs of people and pay burden of debt to lenders rather than utilised it for tourism attraction. For example, The red fort is well known for foreigner attractions, required high security which needs trained and high salaried people. As a result, it consumes considerable amount of money.
In nutshell, spending money for tourism points might be beneficial but it has also some drawbacks which cannot be forgettable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 44, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...the other hand, As a necessary needs of a under developed country, it should use ...
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Line 5, column 328, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "needs trained" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'training' or 'to be trained'.
Suggestion: training; to be trained
...ons, required high security which needs trained and high salaried people. As a result, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, well, for example, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1132.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 216.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24074074074 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86145569062 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648148148148 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5807021678 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.909090909 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6363636364 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116924891271 0.242375264174 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390681325884 0.0925447433944 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341099702405 0.071462118173 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0757911770811 0.151781067708 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325144703391 0.0609392437508 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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