Some people think is better for people to change their carrier at least once in their life and dude to Prakash of jobs do you agree with the opinion
some person thought is good for people to change their carrier for one time in their life so that they bring experiences to different kind of a jobs. In my opinion, agreed that people were change carrier for one time. I will discuss my views on upcoming paragraphs
There are play Thora of results with pros pictures my views. Firstly the person I can change the job so what secure their future and bring experience from any field of the person was the person was employer in company but any listen the company was the rusticate the employer. The person can have second chance to have success in our life in there in other fields that have an experience.
Further more there are many multinational companies are there are in good position in the marketing they have good name and famous in their field, sometime the company had face big loss in market as well as they harm to the workers and the company was struck off their workers have experience in other field then they can do other job in their life.
In conclusion, person will change their carrier in their life because they are getting more experience and they have strong in their life and they can face joy and sorrow in their life
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, so, then, well, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56018518519 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18368887094 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486111111111 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 308.7 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.4900607714 49.4020404114 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.714285714 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8571428571 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0 7.06120827912 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28044371879 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152602158749 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115906282204 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190705666847 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104671499408 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.76 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 78.4519038076 34% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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