Art is considered as an essential part of all cultures throughout the world.
However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business.
Why do you think that is?
What could be done to encourage more people to take interest in the arts?
With the advancement of technology, it has been observed that more than 50% of young generations are moving towards Information Technology only. Success full people like Bill Gates, Mark Zuckerberg and companies like Amazon, Google has deeply impressed the youth. Due to the immense integration and addiction of technology in our daily life, people are just focusing on latest technology in their career path. However, multiple measures can be taken to overcome this and make people realize the importance of other fields such as arts.
The worth of art has started being ignored, and the new generation is rapidly moving towards new technology due to its strong bonding within their life. Neglecting the importance of arts need to be stopped as it represent your country at an international level. Furthermore, Arts plays a vital role in our day to day life. Recreational activities help children and family to step out from their home, and enjoy the different phase of life, which is essential.
Government should take mandatory steps to avoid such ignorance. First of all organizing local events and promoting arts is a must. Secondly they can create jobs, which will increase the demand. Government should consider arts as a separate entity while planning a budget. They should invest some handsome amount for its growth.
In conclusion, people should not ignore the importance of such fields. Government should take proper steps to keep a balance among them. This seems to me be the only way to overcome the turnover of youth to one direction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14960629921 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68129602594 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641732283465 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6155221685 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.75 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.875 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176278344814 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513947165616 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430436688149 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0928582418909 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454131990737 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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