sense of humor is an important quality or not?
The sense of humor has an influential and tremendous impact on our lives. In fact, it is vitally important to have friends that have this sense because they will have the aptitude to spice up and make our days. Therefore, I totally agree with this statement that said one of the imperative quality of the individual is to be funny and able to raise people pleasure due to its benefits in both of improving the social skills and enhance our mental health. The following explanations go as follows.
First, people that are flexible and well-rounded are very successful in the workplace. Indeed, they are able to create new friendships easily and deal effectively with their coworkers which will reflect positively on their work outcome and improve the revenue for the place they work in. For instance, I had a funny friend that lead our organization to a stunning annual profits because he had the capability to create a friendlier atmosphere that encouraged the subordinates to finish their work in a more orderly and timely fashion, in addition, they placed more effort in work because such an environment helped them to cooperate efficiently and collaborate effectively, thus, such a collaborative environment enhanced their communication skills immensely which had a great influence on our work productivity and future workflow. In conclusion, have such a sense will guide the work to a more profitable and improve the interpersonal skills.
Second, people have long stress labor days that may affect their mental health dramatically. In fact, being involved in a group of humorous people will assist them to refine their psychology. For example, engaging in a conversation with a friend that is able to make us laugh will aid us to get rid of the stress and built up a tension of our stressful lives and revitalize us a battery that is being recharged which will, in turn, this reflects positively on our personalities and enhance our mood dramatically. Consequently, in order to have better mood, we must eagerly seek to have friends that have a sense of humor.
To sum up, I can not oversee that there are myriad amount qualities in people lives but be able to create laugh in people has a vital role in establishing the strong foundation of the social skills and improve our mental health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 373, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'profit'?
Suggestion: profit
...d our organization to a stunning annual profits because he had the capability to create...
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Line 5, column 27, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'stressed'.
Suggestion: stressed
...al skills. Second, people have long stress labor days that may affect their mental...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, may, second, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1918.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95607235142 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88398718821 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50645994832 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 131.396954924 48.9658058833 268% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 147.538461538 100.406767564 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7692307692 20.6045352989 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6923076923 5.45110844103 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143178084397 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612644451967 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836935348516 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945971843412 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779117019916 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 11.7677419355 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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