All education (primary, secondary and further education) should be free to all people and paid for by the government. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Education plays an essential role in the modern liefe, which will decide how far can a country grow. Some people express their opinion that education should be sponsored by the government and totally free of charge. Even though there are variance of opinion on this statement, it is true that budget cuts in education will increase the chances for more children to go to school. That's the reason why I'm extremely agree with this statement.
To begin with, I would claim that reducing cost in education , especially primary and secondary, will help ensure that nobody will miss education just because they can't afford. Nowadays, the illiteracy rate in many developing countries are alarming high since there atr so many parents can't afford the high school fee. This circumstance leads to a result that more and more children are becoming illiterate, which will eventually make that country go down since those children are the one who will contribute their knowledge to make their countries develop. If there are so many children that are illiterate in a country, who will help it grow up? This tough issue can be solve by free educational courses, which will reduce the illiteracy rate in that country and also make their education develop, just like what Finland did to their country.
Moreover, free educational courses will also help prevent young people from commiting crimes. Going to school will give them knowledge and also the consciouness about crimes, which will make them stay away from it. Besides, staying at school all day will also reduce their time spending on wandering on the streets and making friends with bad guys, which will also reduce their chances of commiting crimes. Furthermore, teachers can be those who will help parents a lot in looking after thier children.
However, the government shouldn't pay for all university courses since it will make students become less responsible to their study. In addition, if they only want to reduce the illiteracy rate, managing the primary and secondary educational courses are enough.
In conclusion, every children have their own opportunity to have good standard of education. I totally agree that the government should manage education, but just in minimum education like primary and secondary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, in addition, in conclusion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 7.85571142285 267% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1917.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19512195122 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53646740767 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528455284553 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.34702792 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.764705882 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7058823529 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47058823529 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200562730479 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078905245518 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636179990931 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130073813615 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687317903756 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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