more people will work from home and more students will study at home, if computer technology becomes cheap and accessible.
What will be the advantages and disadvantages if this happens?
Lifestyle has been undergone the dramatic change from the couple of decades, because of technologies inventions and work and study are one of them. Group of people will work from home and learning will start at home by students. I personally believe that advantages of working and studying while at home are more than disadvantages.
There are mammoth of advantages of this phenomenon. To commence with, this tendency will offer them more flexibility as working hours can be adjusted as per their own comfort. For instance, they can be relish their time with family. Hence, they will work for family obligations in more effective and efficient way. Furthermore, The another prominent advantage of this phenomenon is that, vulnerable people like elders or physically challenged, who are unable to commute at their work place everyday, will earn their living easily while sitting at home. Thus, they will contribute to global economy as well. On the top of it, children will be able to attain quality education from better universities from across the globe free from geographical ties.
On the other hand, it has darker side too. To begin with, being social animals, humans need interaction. But, social interaction will be reduced by this tendency. Hence, communication will be diminished in society. Moreover, it may leave detrimental effect in industries like tour and travels, food and beverages, insurance transport and so on. Hence, they will have to face hard time.
In conclusion, as per my above discussion it is evident that advantages outstrip the disadvantages, because, inventions are making them flexible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 6.10837438424 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 259.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27027027027 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85232297199 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637065637066 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.7913033274 50.4703680194 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2941176471 104.977214359 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2352941176 20.9669160288 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.456060566204 0.242375264174 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136132326145 0.0925447433944 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109173987816 0.071462118173 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245841318485 0.151781067708 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.163180573111 0.0609392437508 268% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 12.6369458128 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 53.1260098522 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.69 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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