Some people work long hours and hard to achieve success and some give importance to free time for them. Give your opinion and discuss your views.
Nowadays, working for long hours to achieve success has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world, which leads to a moot question “which helps you to reach success, working long hours or giving importance to free time?”. It is a widely held view that making an effort to acquire prosperity is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that one must weigh up carefully the pros and cons of this issue.
To begin with, it is a common belief that working long hours to achieve success plays a vital role in the world of cut-throat competition. To put into consideration, I express why I support this idea. First and foremost is that people will be able to increase their earning capacity as well as wealth to enjoy high living standard. Secondly, it can be argued that hard working provide individuals job security and they enjoy the sustainable profession. In addition to this information, it should be mentioned that working endlessly brings others more fame and popularity. A group of socialists, working at a prestigious university conducted that an extensive range of successful scientists or businessmen could reach the prosperity summit by hard working.
However, there is no doubt that working without considering any spare time provides people with various negative points. It should be taken into account that such working causes a wide variety of disease, including psychological disorders or mental deprivation. Moreover, their families might be neglected as a result of hard working and make a sedentary society for themselves.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that appropriate circumstances must be taken into consideration to encourage people to work hard and achieve success. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ong hours to achieve success has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, in addition, no doubt, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1207.87684729 133% => OK
No of words: 302.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32450331126 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0091668786 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 139.433497537 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632450331126 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 379.143842365 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3150367844 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.692307692 104.977214359 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.25397266985 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265423179809 0.242375264174 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763409240254 0.0925447433944 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765759385506 0.071462118173 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149555286368 0.151781067708 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494016580182 0.0609392437508 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 12.6369458128 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 55.0591133005 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.94827586207 181% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.