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You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager in this letter
Hi Sunil,
Hope you are doing great. I am happy to inform you that i have purchased new flat in my native. I would like to take off for the next week March 25 to 30 to assist my house warming ceremony on March 28. Since most of the minor construction works are pending my physical presence is needed to complete it before Mar 29. I would need to purchase few things for my function as well.
I will make sure none of my deliverable is impacted due to my absence. I have created a work plan and transitioned it to my peers. Please approve my week off.
Thanks and Regards,
Priyankaa
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 204, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... my house warming ceremony on March 28. Since most of the minor construction works ar...
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Line 5, column 72, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...iverable is impacted due to my absence. I have created a work plan and transition...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 483.0 937.175257732 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 112.0 206.0 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3125 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.2531531234 3.78020617076 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42711024846 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 127.690721649 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.723214285714 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 148.5 290.88556701 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1881931144 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 53.6666666667 76.5299724578 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.4444444444 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.444444444444 4.34317383033 10% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116299733672 0.216113520407 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488575517146 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0278424537751 0.0603063233224 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0902173028616 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438734842248 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.1 8.37731958763 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.83 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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