The line graph below shows the case of diseases caused by x virus in Australia from 1960 to 1995.
The given line graph depicts, the influence in x virus from Australia between 1960-1995.
According to the graph, in 1960 year was started and in 1995 year was dropped virus. On the other hand , in 1960 year was started steadily gone up in 1970 year. Obviously in 1970 year was rapidly increased . From 1975-1980 year were represented remained stable. On the one side, conversely in 1980 gradually fallen down. In 1985 year was sharply reduced x virus in the Australia. Between 1990-1995 year were presented significant remained unchanged. Most of people's were faced virus between 1975-1980 year. And it was exactly 500. Overall, lots of people's were faced this disease between 1975-1980 and year by year by sight lay decreased virus. And x virus was started quantity under 100. And in 1970 year was shown 200 and sharply rised in 1975 year. Virus was plummeted level started over 400.
- The pie chart below shows tge results of a survey of the causes foor poor learning outcomes in schools in a particularly country in 2011. 56
- Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere.Do yoy agree or disagree? 56
- A lot of money is spent on the fashion and hair care. Some people it is a wastage of money, however other feel it important in the present time. Discuss views and give your own opinion. 67
- Some people think that rich countries should support poor countries in terms of aid for hralth care and education What extent do you agree or disagree 61
- The bar chart below shiws the global sales of television by supervision incorporataion from 1999 2012 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 103, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ear was dropped virus. On the other hand , in 1960 year was started steadily gone ...
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Line 4, column 206, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ously in 1970 year was rapidly increased . From 1975-1980 year were represented re...
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Line 4, column 451, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the peoples') or simply say ''Most peoples''.
Suggestion: Most of the peoples; Most peoples
...esented significant remained unchanged. Most of peoples were faced virus between 1975-1980 year...
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Line 4, column 603, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'year by'.
Suggestion: year by
...aced this disease between 1975-1980 and year by year by sight lay decreased virus. And x virus ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, if, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 740.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 149.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96644295302 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43875914355 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557046979866 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 194.4 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 22.4926829268 44% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.755717053 43.030603864 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 52.8571428571 112.824112599 47% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.6428571429 22.9334400587 46% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.35714285714 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178224971486 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812963043776 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110881919462 0.0843802449381 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.280196417622 0.15604864568 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.161213697965 0.0819641961636 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 13.2329268293 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.71 61.2550243902 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.7 10.3012195122 36% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.36 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.4329268293 44% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.9970731707 55% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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