Recent figures show an increase in violent crime youngsters under the age of 18. Some psychologist claime get the basic reason for this is that children these days are not getting the social and emotional learning their leader from parents and teachers.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with opinion
The crime rate is increasingly day by day. In young generation ,under age of 18, they do crime and some psychologist says that some reason are there, because the pupils do not have social and emotional learning and do not follow their parents guidance. I agree with your statement that I will discuss my views on upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, in modern era, technology is develop day by day,children do not spent Time with parents, they are not attached with parents. Because every people are spent time in social websites like Facebook Twitter WhatsApp and some other. They do not think anything without this. In addition, the children or do not do homework with the help of guidance of tutors, because they think Internet is best way to teaching us, They learnt everything from Internet. Moreover, in that Time, and fast pace of life, every parents are busy in their life to Arun their bed and butter. They do not give time to children so that reason they do not touch with children and it became effect in their life.
Furthermore, the parents are also responsible, because they do not give time to children's and they did not know the children but they're doing in their life. Some peoples are doing bad things, because nobody can take care of children and their take on drug and in the addiction of drugs, they also do crime for earning money. Because there is no take money from parents, to take drugs.
Then conclusion, every people have their own views. I do not deny any of them but I cogitate, a person should give time for children's and take care properly so that children do not disturb attached with parents and they follow their parents guidelines.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70408163265 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37594468524 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496598639456 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.628083103 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7857142857 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176904990936 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765904775927 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061438827489 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139015580262 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677543425722 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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