government should make more efforts to promote alternative sources of energy.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
The global requirement for energy is on increase at a very high speed, due to increase in demand, mainly in the fast growing countries such as India and China. So, it is vitally important that I regime around the world explore and invest in alternate sources of energy. I firmly agree with this statement, which I can portray in the subsequent segments.
To begin with, there are umpteen reasons, which are propitious to my view point. The predominant reason is, the global warming is increasing at the mammoth rate, among several nations. The main cause of global warming is the usage of gasoline for vehicles and factories which is giving detrimental aftermaths to the existence of mankind. For instance, melting of ice-mountain in north polls, rise in sea level, more floods in some countries while droughts and famines in the other part of the world. So, it is crucial that states spend more money on developing another fuels. Far example, biofuels, which are eco-friendly and renewable.
Leaping further, the expression of the petrol from the earth is increasing every year, because of the rise in global demand. Therefore, it is clear that natural resources will not be available everywhere in the world. so, it is must that countries with high technology, develop various sources of energy in order to not to run out of petrol in food decades. Besides this, increasing the demand of petrol in the society is increasing the cost of fuel, because of reducing the sources of fuel. Due to the high cost, impoverished people face hurdles in using the petrol and deisel. Due to this, Government should emphasis on using other source of energy such as solar energy and so on, which are also affordable.
To recapitulate, I reiterate my viewpoint that government must explore the other kind of energy sources to reduce the adverse effect of global warming. Hence, I cogitate that it is the need of the hour to you alternative energy sources such as biofuels and solar energy, which are eco-friendly as well as affordable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, hence, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, kind of, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94152046784 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6779475661 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0428054139 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4117647059 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1176470588 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145891317231 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457402108043 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478970243972 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955391169532 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355211270676 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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