People recognize a difference between children and adults. What events (Experiences or ceremonies) make a person an adult? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.
Childhood and adulthood are two successive stages of human development. It is pretty easy to make distinctions between them in appearance. However, a psychological difference sometimes is not so clear. The difference between children and adults is in the way they think, feel, make their own decisions and take responsibility. Let me describe the events or experiences which differentiate adults and children.
First of all, it is a physical change that makes a person an adult. Obviously, age is an apparent standard for judgment. With the time passing by, a person's the physic characters change. We can tell whether a person is an adult from the face, the height and other physiology characters. Secondly, childhood is characterized by innocence and freedom. Generally, children are not obligated to do anything that they do not want and they do not have any responsibility for others. At adulthood things change dramatically. They are often imposed with responsibilities of themselves as well other family members. They are more mature and to some extent selfish for their families. Therefore, the first thing that makes an adult is age as well responsibility and maturity.
Moreover, economic independence makes one adult. For example, the first time a teenager gets a job, you may say that he is no longer a child. After all, in most cases from that moment his parents do not treat him as an infant. Adults hold more knowledge than children do. To some extent, the process through which children learn their subjects in schooling is the process which makes children adults. This knowledge brings maturity in them and that maturity differentiates the child from an adult.
In some of the cases even a child has been imposed with responsibilities and economic burden of a family and I think in such a case they are not different from adults. Many other social events like getting in to the society, getting knowledge, getting married, having children, being independent in all aspects of life, are the stages or the events which separates adults from children.
To recapitulate, I would say that the difference between children and adults is in the way they think, feel, make their own decisions and take responsibility. The age, knowledge and economic independence in combination with our traditional and social ceremonies are main distinctions that distinguish adults from children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 176, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is sometimes
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Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
...for judgment. With the time passing by, a persons the physic characters change. We can te...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...entiates the child from an adult. In some of the cases even a child has been imposed wit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, after all, for example, i think, first of all, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2013.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2015503876 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05338681085 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49354005168 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 628.2 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.7829921316 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.52 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.48 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 3.4128256513 381% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24915450828 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721164677254 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588213412624 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155873023765 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386258287127 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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