Some people say that professional workers such as doctors, nurses, and teachers make greater contribution and therefore should be paid more than those sports and entertainment stars.
To what extent do you agree?
It is true that some people who have special abilities should be given more rewards than general employees do. Others believe that it is not about professional workers, but how much contribution they can contribute for humanity. This essay will explain about above topic.
Advance talents have to be paid with high salary because people who have the special skills have to use their own budget. There are two acceptable reasons. First of all, they deserve a lot of benefits instead of the wealth for paying tuition fee and living cost when they are studying. Secondly, they also have to get good income to focus on their well-paid job such as teachers and doctors. For example, the teacher cannot concentrate in their professions as a person who should share and teach their pupils in class if they still think about money. Sometimes, most trainers look for other works to add wage. That is why the teachers are supposed to gain huge salary.
On the other side, other careers also have to get much money such as sports and entertainments stars. They suit to be given more appreciation of what they have done for nation because of making country proud. Two considerations are why they should be paid proper wage too. Firstly, they have struggled to have unique skills and competed with some professional rivals to be successful. The second, they often succeed in an international exhibition and make government proud in the world. For instance, sports stars can be winner that it is not easy to achieve it, so the officials should repay more gifts.
In conclusion, there are convincing arguments both for and against that everybody deserves enormous bonus in their professions. Some people believe that it will be better is the government or institution has standard for giving reward. In my opinion, every person can receive bigger salary when they can provide advantages and contribute to importance of human life.
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