Hi guys. This is the first time I write a part of Ielts Writing. This is the task 1 topic. Hope you guys help me correct an essay. Thanks so much.
"The graph below shows UK acid rain emissions, measured in millions of tones, from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007."
The line graph illustartes the acid rain emissions in the UK, which mesured in millions of tones in four varied sectors from 1990 t 2007.
Overall, th UK acid rain emissions decreased except in Transport and communication. Although the trends were similar in Electricity, Gas and Water supply, Domestic and Other industries of a general decline, the acid rain emission in Electricity, Gas and Water supply was fall strongly than two other sectors.
Throughout of the period, the UK acid rain emussions in the Transport and communication and Electricity, Gas and Water supply fluctuate. But it was felt sharply in the Electricity from 1991 to 1997 when the acid rain emussion in transport tended to increase and it was highest in 1 million tones in 2005. There were a general decline in these two sectors in the 2005 - 2007 period.
Over the same period the UK acid rain emussions in Domestic and other industries didn't fluctuate ore than two sectors above. It dropped to under 0.5 million tones in Domestic and under 1.25 million tonesin 2005. They were stable remained from 2005 to 2007.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 82, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ssions in Domestic and other industries didnt fluctuate ore than two sectors above. I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92934782609 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67408634206 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510869565217 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4479240484 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.777777778 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 5.23603664747 6% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145987144819 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723521698651 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047485890663 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109391967099 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427118404855 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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