Climate change is now an accepted threat to our planet, but there is not enough political action to control excessive consumerism and pollution. Do you agree?
It could argue that climate change is now an agreeable danger to the earth. However, there are unfair political movements to control extravagant consuming and infection. I do not agree with this opinion. This essay will give information about this problem and How could we face it? and, What should the politicians and governors do?
First of all, air pollution is considered the most significant cause of climate change. The emissions from factories are the main issue because of the dangers that affected to the environment. Moreover, it is going to affect the upper atmosphere, and it is called the global warming.
For example, building many factories in the major cities could harm the air by these toxic gases. For that, the citizens should have a responsibility towards this problem to avoid its consequences.
The government should create strict laws and regulations to ensure the security of our plant from danger. In other words, the governor people must discuss some lows in the Congress and Federal organizations to settle this issue. For instance, force the companies owners to redevelop their structures by adding new features that can be more useful for the environment, and they must observe these regulations and ensure that it was under implement.
Finally, if all people stand together to face global warming and climate change, it will be more significant for our plant health, and better future for all of us.
In conclusion, individuals should not support the idea of climate change is a real fact and has not any solution, while they must stand together and face it. The government must take some responsibility to save our planet Earth.
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Suggestion: And
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08759124088 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72557129386 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598540145985 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.9730030814 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.125 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127877006663 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454335331294 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535361289835 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0609762003241 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624328317523 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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