To get education through computer and internet is important or through teacher and student.Discuss both view and give your opinion.
Getting education through computer and internet is very essential in this high-tech era. These are the undeniable factors of education. On the other hand, some others have conflicting views that teacher and school play indispensable role in getting student into education. In my opinion, teachers and school are the best source to provide the optimum opportunities in the field of education.
To begin with,it is universally acknowledged that teacher is role model for their students, without teacher or guru there is no existence of a child. School is a place where foundation of future is built.There
is a lot of material printed in books, what the use of that ? It is only the teacher who can make understand the students, what is the importance of books and the sentences written in it.As well as school provides the suitable environment for study.
Moving further, others have their own views regarding the role of computer and internet. Since, a person can accumulate a great deal of knowledge through the using of computer and internet. One can get latest information regarding any topic. Moreover, it is time saving, provide new techniques of learning.One can get connect with the friends or family in a blink of an eye.
In my notion, the role of computer and internet is irrefutable even though there are some short comings which forced one to step behind like adult movies. Apart from this,nowadays due to this facility people are disconnecting with their friends and family members. I strongly go with the role of teacher and school which are part and parcel of one's life .
To conclude, teacher and students are the foundation maker of students instead of computer and internet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, regarding, so, well, apart from, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07117437722 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79553318815 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551601423488 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3069629073 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272447659268 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885911941388 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842442213203 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137306901145 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905339246321 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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