some people say that industrial growth is necessary to solve poverty but some other people argue that industrial growth is creating environment problem and it should be stopped discuss both view and give your opinion
Industries in whole world is very lucrative foe common layman to uplift the living standard.Other considered that,such industries spread pollution.Which have alarming effect on human health and environment.Here,I would like to discuss for both sides along with my own perception.
There are manifold points to shore up its merits.First and foremost,Industries provide much opportunities to masses.To justify,They can earn bread and butter to do work in such factories.Consequently,they get golden chance for completing towering desires and aspirators.Secondly,It is very worthwhile for financial condition of our nations.For instance,If government as well as individual should be taken numerous steps to reduce this poverty problem by giving fair opportunities to masses.
By contrast,Other masses argue that,Spreading the pollution by industries is the prime factor of health menace.To be specific,Most of people are suffering from much ailment.such as,respiratory,cancer problem and so forth.this menace is intensifying day by day.Therefore,numerous remedial measures can be taken to root out this worrying concern.
To conclude,I strongly believe that,giving the job to people is very useful for earning name and fame.While,Increasing the noise pollution is the foundation head of harassment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1124.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 181.0 315.596192385 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.20994475138 5.12529762239 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.4760042815 2.80592935109 160% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.718232044199 0.561755894193 128% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.2975951904 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.877950017 49.4020404114 231% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 281.0 106.682146367 263% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.25 20.7667163134 218% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 27.25 7.06120827912 386% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148125286311 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801233524802 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0263259967079 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0801233524802 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263259967079 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.4 13.0946893788 232% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 0.42 50.2224549098 1% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 11.3001002004 216% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 19.63 12.4159519038 158% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.54 8.58950901804 134% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.1190380762 198% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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