Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matter such as food, clothes and entertainment is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
It is crucial for every parent to know how to raise up their children wisely. Many people think that giving the child the opportunity to choose his personal matters can lead to him to be selfish while others see that this is an important mean to teach the child to be decisive. I totally agree with the opinion that allow children to take their own decisions regarding their matters.
Many people believe that children are not mature enough and allowing them to make choices can result in being self-centered. For instance, if a child gets used to choose certain toys and his parent can not afford bringing them at any time, he will be in rage. Another important issue is that a child whose needs are always fulfilled, cannot feel others' sufferings and so he will never think to take part in social services or charity.
On the other hand, an opposing group can raise the argument regards this issue due to many reasons. Firstly, children have to feel they are independent. Helping the child to take decisions regards simple matters like food, clothes or toys since early on will result in an adult who can choose his education and work field wisely later on. Secondly, making choices aids children to be more responsible. For example, the child learns that every choice will have consequences that he will need to bear as it was his own choice not other's.
In conclusion, It is vital to give permission for children to make choices regarding certain issues in their lives. I believe this would help in teaching children to be responsible for their decisions and the consequences of their choices.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 214, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to bring'.
Suggestion: to bring
...tain toys and his parent can not afford bringing them at any time, he will be in rage. A...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78776978417 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45523294859 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539568345324 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2014683073 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.384615385 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257284667981 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985326581548 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690326293161 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167991636514 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341946571679 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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