Many people say that cooking and eating at home is better for the individual and the family than eating out in restaurants or canteens.
Do you agree or disagree?
With the impact of modern culture, most of the people prefer to eat outside to have experience of different type of foods and to enjoy being out with family. To this, some people said food prepared at house is more delicious tha at the outside ambience. I totally agree with those who recon that home's food is far better than hotels, which i will discuss in upcoming paragraphs.
First and the foremost, meal prepared at home is more nutritious and healthy. As, it is cooked with all the homemade ingredients and in a more hygienic conditions. Unlike, in thr canteens, where people not even wash their hands properly. By eating outside, people got sick rapidly and indulge with different kinds of hand transmitted diseases. For instance, in the past, in UK, typhoid was being transferred by lady chef , who was suffering from this illness, through contact with her blood, she contaminated the whole food and spread the health issue within the customers. So, the food prepared at home is more healthy.
Moreover, going to the hotels for having dinners or lunches can be expensive, which cannot be afford by everyone. Lower and middle class, cannot go for foods outside daily, it can be costly for them. So, cooking at home caould be more cheaper. To add on, by eating junk food , the obesity level in young generation is increasing rapidly, which is further alarming for heart diseases, more cholesterol level. In comparison to this, eating at home is not fatty and little amount of oil is added. Last but not the least, families can have more privacy and spac , while having food at tgeir own place, not in any restaurant. They can share their daily chores and discuss important discussions.
To recapitulate, yes it is tempting to have some fast-food and to experience different varieties of food, but it can be done once in blue moon and eating at home should be adopted as a healthy habit to get away from unwanted diseases.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 282, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a recon'.
Suggestion: who is a recon
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Message: Use only 'cheaper' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: cheaper
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80780780781 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52272656179 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585585585586 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1582967537 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1764705882 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5882352941 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88235294118 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217487796263 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760862891624 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399924325234 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135412576481 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034195388968 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.