Most artists earn low salaries. Governments should support artists in order for them to continue their work.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Being an artist might give immense satisfaction but usually it does not do well with wages. The negligence towards this fact for long has led to reduce in the artists and certainly calling for immediate support actions from the government. This essay will discuss how the government involvement will make artists more strong and focused on their career.
As a legislative, the government plays a vital role in supporting the artists financially. It can encourage by awarding cash prizes to their achievements. For example, it can also initiate events where artists gets more opportunities which will subsequently lead to a financial support. Thus all these actions will give a financial balance to artists and useful contacts for using them as a ladder in their career growth.
Low wages are inextricably linked to decrease in deterioration of artists count. Government can create some laws that would greatly aid these artists in their endeavors. As an example, it can make a strict and stringent rules on minimum payment of a salary. These actions will help the situation turning from bad to a good state.
Last but not least artists are the great assets to our society and they must be supported with good wages. In my opinion I agree that the government should take aforementioned actions promptly otherwise artists might lose their hopes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 288, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...bsequently lead to a financial support. Thus all these actions will give a financial...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'not the least'.
Suggestion: not the least
...g from bad to a good state. Last but not least artists are the great assets to our soc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, thus, well, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 6.10837438424 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1136.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 221.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14027149321 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78650748859 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62443438914 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.2734161152 50.4703680194 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.3846153846 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.9669160288 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 7.25397266985 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290782909615 0.242375264174 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103373849607 0.0925447433944 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566687157518 0.071462118173 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181530047022 0.151781067708 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358874795823 0.0609392437508 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.5 Out of 90
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