Competitiveness is a skill that is required in order to succeed. How does competitiveness affect the individual? Is it positive or negative?
Competitiveness is a skill that illustrate tenacity what people want. Nowadays, under the impact of many factors such as, over population as well as peers who walk ahead of, establish a strong competitiveness skill to people. Glanced at the strong resilience of people, conclusion indicates that competitiveness influence to mankind negatively in many ways.
First of all, probably, over tenacity leads to conflict of friends. Suppose that you compete with your best friend, and both of you will try to win despite the friendship. However, you have to comprehend that close relationship is worth more than your win. In China, for example, due to over population students tend to prefer not to build a friendship during their school life time and get over competitive to get an invitation from universities since colleges will initiate only top rated students. Furthermore, victory of competition is just a temporary thing, while, your beloved friend will stay with you for the rest of your life.
More importantly, negative impact of competitiveness is being unfold on friends and families of person. Hard working students, or workers perhaps ignore their beloved ones in order to succeed. Whereas, people who had not put so much effort that create concentration in sole on study or work, will have a time to observe the real life meaning and spend his/her valuable time with loved ones. For instance, Jack Ma, CEO of Alibaba company, said that students who were average in studying had a time to observe other things than studying and in future they will succeed without a doubt. Moreover, the one who is special to you would may have a serious disorder, or perhaps pass away suddenly due to many factors and that is the spectacular example of not devoting more time with your friends or family. As a consequence, you will end up regretting for wrong action.
By way of conclusion, some may argue that competitiveness is only way to survive and succeed in modern world, in my view, however, it have a cross impact in human being from many perspectives. People may lose their valuable time by chasing to successful life and ignore their family and friends, as well as over resilience create a break between best friends. Whereas, if you balance your daily working time and time that you have to spend in family, you do not have to be over competitive in order to succeed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1976.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.927680798 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79007236962 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531172069825 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.0 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6820314863 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.235294118 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5882352941 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58823529412 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14966694838 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587333797026 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597436666886 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108647614771 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567888899599 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.