In the past people liked to store knowledge in books. However, in the present, we prefer to store knowledge in the internet. Do you think advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In recent decades, the usage of internet has been flourishing so much that people initiated to save knowledge in the internet, however, it has a certain drawbacks too. This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and provide a logical conclusion.
The two main advantages of storing information in the internet is its convenience to save vast amount of information and with the help of immediate pace of internet data will spread faster than the book throughout the world. Firstly, internet is the limitless accumulation of data from the variety of resources. On the other hand, book is limited by its page quantity, therefore, solely given information should be kept in books. Secondly, for the flow of time the quantity of people who enjoy reading a book has been decreasing considerably. In other words, since the invention of websites, which were established for people's enjoyment, people has been moderately addicting to the google, youtube and other websites. Based upon this demographic trend, the most efficient method to spread the information throughout the world is storing the data in the internet.
However, internet stored information has some drawbacks that should be mentioned, like the occasional demolition of folder, and the invasion of cyber crime. Firstly, the issue whether the information that kept in the internet is durable or not, should be concerned in this case. In other words, one might delete the wrong file instead of document that must be deleted. As a consequence, it brings a considerable amount of regret towards the deleted file. In addition, if the personal information such as, bank accounts have been stored in the internet, it will attract criminals and perhaps you will encounter with cyber crime. Nonetheless, all these problems will just depend upon the individual and his/her responsibility towards internet.
By way of conclusion, albeit storing data in the internet is beneficial overall, it may have some particular disadvantages as I mentioned earlier. The flourish of internet internet storing method has been taking the place in many corners of the world. Therefore, the debate has been yielded by many people whether it is advantageous or not. In my opinion, I strongly support the perspective that the advantages outweigh its disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'drawback'?
Suggestion: drawback
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: internet
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1951.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28726287263 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96360019146 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517615176152 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.9 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8597150635 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.388888889 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247596150385 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728320289282 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050503880726 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159233687259 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376773701436 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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