You have recently moved to a different house.Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter•Explain why you have moved•Describe the new house•Invite your friend to come and visit

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You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
• Explain why you have moved
• Describe the new house
• Invite your friend to come and visit

I hope this letter finds you in the pink of your health. I am writing this letter to inform you that I have moved to new house a few days ago in a colony named ‘The Green County’ located in suchi pind in jalandhar . The landlord of my old house asked me to increase the rent of the house which was un reasonable. Secondly, the new house where I shifted recently is very close to my office place unlike my earlier house which was so far from my office.

I would like to tell you about my new house. My new house is an independent unit, it has 3 bedrooms with attached bathrooms and an open kitchen adjacent to a living area. Also, there is a small beautiful garden in the colony.

It will be delightful for me if you visit to my house with your family on this coming weekend. I hope we can have fun and enjoy with each other.

Looking forward to seeing you’re here.

Yours sincerely,
gaurav

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...new house is an independent unit, it has 3 bedrooms with attached bathrooms and a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, second, secondly, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 749.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38011695906 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.381159997 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654970760234 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3917571084 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.0909090909 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5454545455 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285981656983 0.216113520407 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102825374315 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628309158735 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146385406645 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548569682871 0.0580467560999 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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