Some children have problems at home and difficulties at school. Why do you think this happens? How can parents help them?
Children are vulnerable members of the society. The way their parents and teachers treat have a significant effect on their behavior. Sometimes we see children with difficulties at home or at school. Psychologists believe that some of these problems are a reaction to their environment or they are sort of hidden internal rages.
In my opinion, there are some main reasons for these kinds of problems. First of all, some of these disorders are children’s’ response to their environment. For example a group of students are genius and if their parents or their teacher can’t find it out it will cause problems and as a result they will be disobedient in the class because the lessons are too easy for them and they get bored. Second of all, the way their parents behave each other and their family is very important. For instance, a family with a newborn baby is a place for this kinds of children because in these families all the attentions are to the new baby and it can suffer the older child. In addition, when parents have raw at home and in front of their children it makes Irrecoverable effects on children which lead to major problems.
In order to solve these kinds of problems spouses should pay attention to their behavior. They should avoid fight and argue. Furthermore, they should try to have the stable upbringing conditions for their children. On top of all these, parents should spend enough time with their children to find out about their talents to help them utilize their gifts.
To sum up, parents, teachers and children should help each other in solving these sort of problems.
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The way their parents and teachers treat have a significant effect on their behavior.
The way their parents and teachers treat has a significant effect on their behavior.
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