When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive.
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Nowadays, modern technology developed dramatically and brings something new in our life. There are lots of benefits from revolution technology. On the other hand, it is significant fact that traditional skill slightly disappears because revolution technology. Some people say is it pointless to try and keep the traditional skills, but fewer people say is it necessary to reserve these traditional skills. This essay will examine those aspects.
Firstly, technology increased rapidly being efficiency and productivity in agriculture and industry. For instance, farming method is changing by using m...
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Sentence: For instance, farming method is changing by using machine farmer has higher productivity, it will helpful to farmer doing their job with the short time.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to will and helpful
with technology it is will be helpful to farmer provide lots of food
with technology it will be helpful to farmer who will provide lots of food
Sentence: It effect from revolution technology, technology bring lots of benefit to our life.
Description: The fragment It effect from is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace effect with verb, past tense
Description: The fragment technology bring lots is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace bring with verb, past tense
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