Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary school to universities, too much time spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Agree or disagree?
There has been heated arguments are going on about whether to restructure our decade old education systems that lacks lot of essential characteristics of todays era. Some people argue that our education system from head to toe mainly concentrates on teaching facts rather than practical aspects of modern world. I completely agree with this statement.
Firstly, many of the countries still following traditional aspects of teaching only, they are not up to dated according to the changing scenarios. In olden days, education system was all about learning facts. But things are entirely changed. In todays fast moving world, where companies and potential recruiters look out for young bloods who can able to apply what they have learned in theories in to a practical environment. Moreover, children must be taught in a way that they can be able practice what they have learned through text books and classes, then only they can be able to survive on this highly competitive world.
Secondly, even after the technological and social changes in twenty first century, our eduction system still gives more time on teaching theoretical based curriculum. Even-though some developed nations modified their education system to a more practical sense, but it still lacks todays changing requirements. Furthermore, education and educated people are the key successful aspects any modern developed economy, if the system fails the entire country will suffer from it. On top of that, the education systems should be competitive in-order to ensure the requirements of ever changing social and economic needs.
To recapitulate, there should a good balance balance between facts based education system and practical based based education system. We need positive aspects of both systems to build a better tomorrow and young lads.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: twenty-first
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'century' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'centuries'.
Suggestion: centuries
...ical and social changes in twenty first century, our eduction system still gives more t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: balance
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: based
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 285.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39649122807 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75630506392 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60350877193 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3052589101 50.4703680194 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.857142857 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.25397266985 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11359454195 0.242375264174 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414960095089 0.0925447433944 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041401729628 0.071462118173 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.068115923525 0.151781067708 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266107424666 0.0609392437508 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.