Write a letter to your friend about your plans to go out with him/her and another friend on a trip. Include the following in your letter:
– where you plan to go
– what arrangements you already made
– what help you need from your friend with this trip.
Dear Steve,
Sorry, it took me too long to reply your previous letter. As, it has been a year, since we haven't met. For compensating that, I have a great plan for us. I have decided to go on an adventurous trip with you and kaven. It will be a great fun.
As you know well, that I am so perfect at planing trips, I had already made arrangements for our spectacular vacation.I choose "scuba diving" ,"Jet skiing" and swimming classes of an hour for kaven specially as you know how good he has swimming skills ? I plan 4 nights and 5 days trip and we will have a flight on July 15 because I know you both will not be able to go after that.
Don't forget to bring your camera and please send me your passport details as well. Apart from all this, Please do transfer your photographs from your camera to laptop so, that we can have our memorable photo-shot.
I hope you like my idea and write me soon as I can't wait because I am very excited about this trip.
Best wishes
John
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Comments
what are the possible changes
what are the possible changes for making it better?
No content for 'where you
No content for 'where you plan to go'. and need more content to introduce this place.
've been looking for good…
've been looking for good information on this topic but haven't had any luck until now. You just won yourself a new biggest fan. fnaf
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...etter. As, it has been a year, since we havent met. For compensating that, I have a gr...
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Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...rangements for our spectacular vacation.I choose 'scuba diving' ,'...
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Line 5, column 152, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...cation.I choose 'scuba diving' ,'Jet skiing' and swimming clas...
^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
...h will not be able to go after that. Dont forget to bring your camera and please ...
^^^^
Line 9, column 48, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...you like my idea and write me soon as I cant wait because I am very excited about th...
^^^^
Line 11, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... excited about this trip. Best wishes John
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, well, apart from, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 822.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37234042553 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.495145198 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670212765957 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.9281341195 44.8134815571 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.7272727273 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284700133172 0.216113520407 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910620659288 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698418225154 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158764013072 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298794146926 0.0580467560999 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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