You have just heard some good news about your friend Write a letter to your friend In your letter say how you heard the news arrange a time to visit your friend at his her house explain what you will bring with you

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You have just heard some good news about your friend.

Write a letter to your friend.In your letter

- say how you heard the news
- arrange a time to visit your friend at his/her house
- explain what you will bring with you

Dear Majid,

I have informed that you got married recently and I am writing this letter to show my great happiness.

I was on a business trip when I noticed about your wedding party. Saeid called me and told me that there will be a party at Hilton hotel next week. He insisted so much to convenience me to attend to your ceremony. I am aware of the fact that it was one of your unforgettable moments in your whole life and I explained him why it is impossible for me to come over.

I would be so happy if we could meet each other after these long days. Hey man, I missed you so much and I wanted to schedule a time at your house next Monday if that would be OK with you. I will be back by then and we can have a fabulous time together.

As you might know, I am going to turkey regularly and the most famous Turkish present is Baklava. You definitely going to love it as it tastes delicious. So, be prepared next Monday and do not forget to buy tea.

I will be waiting to see you the coming Monday.

Be safe,
Jack

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2018-05-10 rezafathi 87 view
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.11386138614 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26789413109 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628712871287 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0342674513 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.9230769231 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5384615385 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.923076923077 4.34317383033 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256178798408 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852551661651 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700420983924 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136404270669 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299591349331 0.0580467560999 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.26 8.71597938144 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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