A close friend is coming to visit you he/she has asked you for advice for things to do in your hometown and the surrounding area.
- Write a letter to your friend . In your letter ask more details about your friend's plans.
- Suggest some places to visit and things to do in your hometown.
- Tell your friend about food or drink he/she should try during his/her stay.
Write at least 150 words.
Begin your letter with Dear ________
Dear John,
I hope you are doing great so as your family.
I am very excited since I got to know that you are visiting my hometown over the long weekend.
Please, let me know about your arrival details and length of stay so that I can schedule accordingly.
It is an ideal time to visit Karachi as weather is quite pleasant these days, daytime is little humid whereas, nights are cool with breezes.
There is an automobile exhibition going which for sure interests you, we can plan a half day visit to expo center. Secondly, a new army museum has opened with a great collection of arms, canon, tanks and helicopters. This museum is currently center of attraction in the city with great history of battlefield and sacrifices.
Of course, we cannot forget shopping on vacations. Recently, Asia's largest mall was innaugrated with major international brands offering exciting discounts.
I am also planning to take you on a long drive at highway where I have discovered a restaurant which serves scrumptious fish and soothing fresh lime, this is something you should not miss.
Please, write me back soon, looking forward to welcome you.
Best Regards,
Osama
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- A close friend is coming to visit you he she has asked you for advice for things to do in your hometown and the surrounding area Write a letter to your friend In your letter ask more details about your friend s plans Suggest some places to visit and thing 75
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 62, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'Asias the largest'.
Suggestion: Asias the largest
...forget shopping on vacations. Recently, Asias largest mall was innaugrated with major interna...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, if, look, second, secondly, so, whereas, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 987.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01015228426 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65381759287 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.730964467005 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4201864944 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.25 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167369636345 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533713291627 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564019088791 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0784032583554 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587831394123 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.