life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparent were children.
I really agree on this point that the life today easier and more comfortable than it was my grandparent were children. If I consider my gradparent age at the time of children then I have to go back about 70 to 60 yeasr back.The peoride in which no such huge facilities were availble by the government.Everybody has to work hardly to make their life comfortable that as we now feel and enjoy it today.
In today's life is so easy to do all work. For example Suppose I have to pay light bill,phone bill and another bill with in a day. It is now possible to pay all these things with in a mintue. By using the online payment but this not possible before 70 years back. They went to office to pay bills and paying all bill with one day was very difficult because for each bill you had to go different places which were way form each other.online service may them easier for us now.
The Second thing is that ,the hospital facilties now days are so advance and modifiy And it is easy to accesse to everybody. We have more hospitals and the doctors now days which they can providing faciltes in our home also.This things was not possible before 70 years back. Moreover in that time there were lack of facilities and doctors.So they could not provide fast and relibale service to patient that time.But now days we just need to dial a phone call to call emergency help which very easy .
Lastly,today's transportation facilites. If we compare it with previous transportation then now we much better than previous.now a days all transportation faclities availble every where in more frequency. Like you have more transportation optio like bus ,taxi,car,train,airways etc.All these make our life better anf easy to travle with minimum time and safely.Before 70 years back transportation was not so fast. For example you have travel 1000 Km like from Pune to New Delhi then you required more than 5 to 6 days but now a days with 2 hrs you can reach to Delhi by airways.It become so easy and comfortbale for us.isn't it?
Hope my grandparent get these all faclities to make their life more easy and comfortable.
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Sentence: We have more hospitals and the doctors now days which they can providing faciltes in our home also.This things was not possible before 70 years back.
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It become so easy and comfortbale for us.isn't it?
It becomes so easy and comfortbale for us.isn't it?
Sentence: If I consider my gradparent age at the time of children then I have to go back about 70 to 60 yeasr back.The peoride in which no such huge facilities were availble by the government.Everybody has to work hardly to make their life comfortable that as we now feel and enjoy it today.
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Sentence: It is now possible to pay all these things with in a mintue.
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Sentence: The Second thing is that ,the hospital facilties now days are so advance and modifiy And it is easy to accesse to everybody.
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Sentence: We have more hospitals and the doctors now days which they can providing faciltes in our home also.This things was not possible before 70 years back.
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Sentence: Moreover in that time there were lack of facilities and doctors.So they could not provide fast and relibale service to patient that time.But now days we just need to dial a phone call to call emergency help which very easy .
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Sentence: Lastly,today's transportation facilites.
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Sentence: If we compare it with previous transportation then now we much better than previous.now a days all transportation faclities availble every where in more frequency.
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