Some sports are extremely dangerous but many people still like them very much. Why do people take part in dangerous sports? Give some suggestions on how to deal with these dangers.
Sports play an important role in the physical and mental development of an individual. There are wide range of sports played by the players such as football, hockey, basketball, cricket, badminton and list goes on. On the other hand, some of the sports are dangerous to great extent and people enjoy performing such activities. This essay shall describe the reasons behind the people's choice of playing such detrimental sports and precautions to be taken while playing them.
Bull fighting, Bull riding, etctera are considered as dreadful sports and are not considered as illegal in various corners of the world. There are plethora of reasons that people choose to them. One of the reasons may be that people those who are extremely poor and their jobs are not paying them much to meet their basic needs. When such people need huge amount of money due to some circumstances, they put their life in risk by playing such sports because the organisers of these activities provide huge amount of money to the participants for their entertainment. In way, needy people earn bags full of money in legal manner.
Moving further, another reason is that there are several sportsman who want to earn name and fame in the society. So, they participate in such sports to make records and to become famous. Besides that, some individuals want to do adventures in their life. They enjoy fighting with a bull rather than worrying of their life.
People participating in these dangerous sports should take several measures in order to save their life from the risks involved in them. Players should undergo proper training before taking part in sports so that they should be aware of all the rules and regulations of the game. Besides that, these sports should be performed under supervision of professionals. Last but not the least, ambulance and doctors should be present at such sites to aid the players in emergency.
In conclusion, I would like to say that people have only one life and should not ruin it by playing risky games instead they should be trained properly to avoid the dangers. All of the above, Government should also come into picture by setting restrictions on the sports which are risky for life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Line 5, column 50, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun sportsman seems to be countable; consider using: 'several sportsmen'.
Suggestion: several sportsmen
...rther, another reason is that there are several sportsman who want to earn name and fame in the s...
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Line 5, column 58, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'sportsmen'?
Suggestion: sportsmen
...nother reason is that there are several sportsman who want to earn name and fame in the s...
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Line 9, column 175, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
... trained properly to avoid the dangers. All of the above, Government should also come into...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, so, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1846.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9490616622 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53285237592 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536193029491 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5017750458 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1578947368 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6315789474 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26315789474 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272001420051 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861527196669 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643575367247 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142897228188 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490305849931 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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