Essay topics:
Ask your boss for a week time off for your honeymoon.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to ask for your permission for one week leave from 25th June to 2nd July, 2018.
As you know, It is my marriage party on next week, and, I would like to spend my honeymoon vacation in Italy, if it is confirmed.
During my leave, my colleague, Mr. Alves, will take part of the emergency office works. He will also attend to the client’s meeting on behalf of me. By the way, I will comply all the coming project matters before my leave. I am available to be reached through the phone.
Please note it is my first time to apply for leave in this company. Hope this clarifies.
Thank you, and I look forward to your favorable response.
Best Regards,
XXXXX
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to ask for your...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 94, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'July 2018'.
Suggestion: July 2018
...or one week leave from 25th June to 2nd July, 2018. As you know, It is my marriage part...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 106, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...leave from 25th June to 2nd July, 2018. As you know, It is my marriage party on ...
^^^
Line 6, column 277, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ilable to be reached through the phone. Please note it is my first time to apply...
^^^
Line 8, column 59, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ook forward to your favorable response. Best Regards, XXXXX
^^^^^^
Line 10, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... favorable response. Best Regards, XXXXX
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, so, you know, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 579.0 937.175257732 62% => OK
No of words: 129.0 206.0 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48837209302 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.37013600491 3.78020617076 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37014156949 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.728682170543 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 171.0 290.88556701 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3372975058 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.9 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220312299172 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643907818336 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0980143033243 0.0603063233224 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126550608565 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110755826039 0.0580467560999 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.87 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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