"It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.reason: the reputation of anyone who is subjected to media scrutiny will eventually be diminished."
The author asserts that there is no way for present-day people to be called a hero any longer, this claim is based on the reason that media will diminish the reputation of individuals gradually. In general, I subscribe to this view that media plays an utmost role in giving credence or fame to individuals, but there are always some exceptional cases which no one can dwindle their popularity.
The reason mentioned by author should be further discussed. Is it only the media that lead and specify the destination of a reputation? Of course not, although no one can neglect the effect of media on p...
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Sentence: Historically, most great people, who the world is indebted to them, were not well revered at the time they were alive.
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Score: 6.0 out of 6
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 493 350
No. of Characters: 2392 1500
No. of Different Words: 249 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.712 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.852 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.674 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 171 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 123 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 85 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 56 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.476 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.222 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.524 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.288 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.452 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.114 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5