The best way to teach whether as an educator, employer , or parents - is to prise positive actions and ignore negatives one.
Since I was a child, I have recived a severe educadon. So that, I don't agree with the state that the best way to learning is to praise positives action and ignoret the negatives reason.
Firstly, is obvious that is much important elogiate goo actions when somebody are learning. For exemple, professor need motive the students, and the best way to do it is praise the positives actions. However, when a student make some thing that is not apropiate the students need be judge. For exemple, when I was child in my firsties year of my school a boy take my lunch and gave me a fist, when my teatcher knew she mede the suspention of the students. Making clear that is necessary.
Second, parents need highlighting positives actions for the children. When we are child is the best phase of our life that we can see how make good actions, because in this time, many times we are punished. Therefore, since we are children we can get notion that we need only make good things and actions, altough some peoples belive that punish is not best way to educate a person.
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- Essay topics: TPO-03 - Integrated Writing Task 70
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...ough some peoples belive that punish is not best way to educate a person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.6327345309 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.9520958084 46% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 11.1786427146 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 28.8173652695 94% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 55.5748502994 22% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 16.3942115768 6% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 2260.96107784 39% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 192.0 441.139720559 44% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.546875 5.12650576532 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 4.56307096286 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41522384192 2.78398813304 87% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 204.123752495 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.468620217663 124% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 705.55239521 39% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.70958083832 295% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 19.7664670659 51% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.6252170863 57.8364921388 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3 119.503703932 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 23.324526521 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.70786347227 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 5.15768463074 58% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.25449101796 133% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138645873033 0.218282227539 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633625248338 0.0743258471296 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743969375822 0.0701772020484 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106772873568 0.128457276422 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456550565465 0.0628817314937 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 14.3799401198 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 48.3550499002 143% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 12.197005988 68% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 12.5979740519 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.32208582834 98% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 98.500998004 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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