You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
• Explain why you have moved
• Describe the new house
• Invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Johnny,
It`s been so long since we met last month. Everything should be fine since you have returned to your native suburb in England. I`m writing to inform you that I have just moved to a new house in the city center.
I had a rental problem with my previous house lord, so I decided to move to a new bigger house. When he decided to increase the monthly rent, I took a decision to get a mortgage from the bank and own a house. Mortgage responsibilities are quit high, but my family was very supportive to take this step. The new house is also accommodate all my family.
You know that my family is quit big. So I chose a large house with two floors, one big kitchen and garden where my kids will be having enough area to play with their peers. My wife is also fascinated with the living room decoration as it belongs to the aristocratic century. I can not forget to tell you about the balcony as you will be getting enjoyed to sit in it during the sunset.
Why do not you come and visit us? I am inviting you to come over any time when you will be available and have a coffee catch up together, but please inform me to be ready with all family.
Seeing you,
Ayoub
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| 2018-06-15 | johnsonwale | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 326, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'accommodated'.
Suggestion: accommodated
...o take this step. The new house is also accommodate all my family. You know that my fami...
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Line 7, column 346, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'enjoyed sitting'.
Suggestion: enjoyed sitting
...bout the balcony as you will be getting enjoyed to sit in it during the sunset. Why do not ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30837004405 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3317659592 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612334801762 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.80920145 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.8571428571 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2142857143 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.92857142857 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248038530298 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917370200999 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750352178146 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15073839165 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605428816777 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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