modern technology allow machine to perform the hard work instead of human? does this have positive or negative effect on people give your opinion with example

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 29, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
Nowadays majority of people are depending on machines.The machines are making lif...
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Suggestion: The
...ity of people are depending on machines.The machines are making life easier in many...
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Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... machines are making life easier in many area agriculture,medical.With the help o...
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Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , medical
...ng life easier in many area agriculture,medical.With the help of machine people done wo...
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Suggestion: With
...asier in many area agriculture,medical.With the help of machine people done work in...
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Suggestion: In
... machine people done work in few minute.In other way it create many problem in our...
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Line 1, column 197, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'creates'?
Suggestion: creates
...done work in few minute.In other way it create many problem in our life.This essay wil...
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Line 1, column 204, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'many problems'.
Suggestion: many problems
...rk in few minute.In other way it create many problem in our life.This essay will discuss bot...
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Suggestion: This
... way it create many problem in our life.This essay will discuss both side positive o...
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Suggestion: , the
...or negative. To begin with its positives,the machines are helpful in the medical wor...
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Suggestion: As
...e through cardiac or surgical operation.As a result it uplift the standard of heal...
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Line 2, column 135, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e through cardiac or surgical operation.As a result it uplift the standard of heal...
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Line 2, column 150, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'uplifts'?
Suggestion: uplifts
...ac or surgical operation.As a result it uplift the standard of health. Machines are ma...
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Line 2, column 224, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...hines are making farmer life is easier. so that he can barely do difficult things ...
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Suggestion: , combine
... do difficult things easily with tractor,combine,cultivator etc.Also computers,printers,...
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Suggestion: Also
...ily with tractor,combine,cultivator etc.Also computers,printers, photocopier print a...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ily with tractor,combine,cultivator etc.Also computers,printers, photocopier print a...
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Line 2, column 323, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , printers
...or,combine,cultivator etc.Also computers,printers, photocopier print and store limitless ...
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Suggestion: On
...and store limitless data for long time. on negative side over excessive on machine...
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Suggestion: Therefore
...ve on machine reduce the physical labor.Therefore many diseases have arisen. forthur it r...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ve on machine reduce the physical labor.Therefore many diseases have arisen. forthur it r...
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Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Forthur
...or.Therefore many diseases have arisen. forthur it replaced human work.This machine hav...
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Suggestion: This
... arisen. forthur it replaced human work.This machine have made a thousand of the wor...
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Suggestion: As
...dividual to earn their bread and butter.As a result it has proved the bain for soc...
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Suggestion: In
...ive effect on society as well as planet.In order to live healthy life we need the ...
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Line 4, column 137, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...t.In order to live healthy life we need the reduce dependence on machines.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 192.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30729166667 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4593372037 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.697916666667 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.385702263 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.571428571 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4285714286 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7142857143 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198533402701 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820796536659 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386415877105 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111889213107 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276521919259 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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