People immigrate to other countries due to various reason of work. some say this have lot of benefits for their children while other say that this brings lot of challenges for a child.
Discuss both opinions and give your view
Immigration have been scaling new heights in present day world as many people look for better job opportunities in developed countries. A section of society believes that this brings lot of benefits for their children as developing their linguistic abilities. Some argue that this brings complexity of challenges infront of a child. In my opinion, immigration of family leads to blend of culture among children, enhancing their social skills. This essay will discuss bith sides of the argument.
The most prominent reason in support of my view is that immigration develops multi-linguistic abilities among a child, which in turn, promotes intellectual abilities. Moreover, it leads to blend of culture. Resultantly, novelty rather than unformity among the children. Furthermore, learning of new environment makes them more adaptable in their lives in future. Resultantly, annexing their horizons of better job opportunities in their futuristic life. Finally, immigrant children are more social friendly.
On the other hand, family faces lot of hardships in adjusting to unknown environment. Most significantly, child finds it difficult to adjust to new social environment, especially, school where most of the classmates are native children and it becomes enormously challenging in syncronising to new social life. As a consequence, he is stresses and suffers from anxiety and psyclogical disorders. Nonetheless, good parenting and moral support from their teachers can ameliorate the situation to large extent.
To sum up, it can be concluded based on afforementioned facts that immigration would continue to rise in popularity in future. Therefore, children would continue to drive benefits associated with it by substantial efforts of their mentors. Seen in this light, benefits driven by children are going to thrive rather than perish in coming years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, if, look, moreover, nonetheless, so, therefore, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64056939502 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14510223024 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601423487544 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.2338244925 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0555555556 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6111111111 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27777777778 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286572561981 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790121899477 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704828285447 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158306621206 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106842984731 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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