You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
• Tell him which team won
• Describe the conditions on the day
• Say how you felt about the match
Dear Fred,
I hope you are recovering fast at hospital after the accident you had last week! I`m writing to tell you match highlights that I played at the weekend.
You know that the match was the final in the league, and it was extremely important to our team. While, the opposite team was determined to win the match, our team made it at the end and won the match. On last minute, fourth referee decided a penalty kick to our team which was our winning goal.
The match kicked off on time, but we could not expect that much of stress due to our responsibility towards all team fans. Many spectators were attending the match at stadium, and it was a great support to all team. First half was not in our favor, but we won at the end due to the diligence of all players and team collaboration.
I was under a tremendous pressure during the match; however, I felt a great relief after the match. When I received the medal while the celebration, I have realized that all efforts were worthwhile and not gone in vain.
Wish you soonest recovery,
Ayoub
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 6, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'you the soonest'.
Suggestion: you the soonest
...orthwhile and not gone in vain. Wish you soonest recovery, Ayoub
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 880.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53608247423 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44805748288 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561855670103 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8094325633 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249271553391 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105330921701 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0994297379925 0.0603063233224 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157324817085 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128558084223 0.0580467560999 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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