The maps below show an island, before and after construction of some tourist facilities.
The given geographical representation illustrate the development made in a 100 meter island for promoting tourism and providing more facilities. It is clear and coherent representation.
To commence with, it can be noticed that there was a lot of development in the island. A reception has been build at the center of the island. There were footpaths constructed so that it becomes easier for the tourists to walk around the island and vehicle track are built so that transportation could be easily undertaken. In addition to this, there was peer built up for tourists to visit the island in the southern part of the island.
Moving ahead , a restaurant was erected in the northern side of the island to provide with the food facilities to the tourists. The island was surrounded with various types of accomodation. In the eastern part of the island, abeach had been noticed where tourists enjoy to do activities like swimming.
Overall, It is evident that an abundant island was turned into a beautiful tourists destination. It was observed that trees were not cutted down for construction that leads to a conclusion that trees are promoted in that island. A peer has been constructed to permit access to the island by the boat.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...hern part of the island. Moving ahead , a restaurant was erected in the norther...
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Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'enjoy doing'.
Suggestion: enjoy doing
... abeach had been noticed where tourists enjoy to do activities like swimming. Overall, ...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... enjoy to do activities like swimming. Overall, It is evident that an abundant ...
^^^
Line 7, column 76, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'tourists'' or 'tourist's'?
Suggestion: tourists'; tourist's
...dant island was turned into a beautiful tourists destination. It was observed that trees...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1031.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9806763285 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95224800893 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545893719807 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2600836304 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9166666667 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.58333333333 5.23603664747 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22046333932 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849559052017 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423750476709 0.0843802449381 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135068377917 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475792849544 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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