Essay topics The bar chart below shows the estimated percentage of car trips taken by drivers in 2005

Grammar and spelling errors:
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this bar chart illustrate the usage of car b...
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...d women for this eight different purpose courses, visiting town, bank , running e...
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...nt purpose courses, visiting town, bank , running errands , visiting friends , re...
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...ank , running errands , visiting friends , recreation , work and shopping as y...
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...friends , recreation , work and shopping as you can see the most usage of the car...
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... men by almost %50 except for recreation . the men use their car almost over %50 t...
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...n by almost %50 except for recreation . the men use their car almost over %50 then ...
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...lmost over %50 then women for recreation . over %50 of men use their car for work ...
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...st over %50 then women for recreation . over %50 of men use their car for work trips...
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... car for work trips and women almost %40 . further more women use their car al...
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...e their car almost %50 more for shopping , visiting friend than men and over %60 u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, except for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 13.0 33.7804878049 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 684.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10460960335 2.65546596893 79% => OK
Unique words: 57.0 106.607317073 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.375 0.547539520022 68% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 198.0 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 100.3421923 43.030603864 233% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 114.0 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 1.69756097561 1060% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0755456059109 0.215688989381 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546266807023 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0216033497125 0.0843802449381 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0614758960553 0.15604864568 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0158050542818 0.0819641961636 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.71 8.06136585366 71% => OK
difficult_words: 8.0 40.7170731707 20% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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